Talk: Bullet

there should be no comma after the first word "bullets". The last sentence also needs repunctuation.

I disagree with the entire write-up.

It contains a description of "Bullets" - the projectiles and a description of a cartridge - a complete round of ammunation (cartridge case,primer, propellent and BULLET).

The page should refer to one or the other, either discuss "bullets" or "cartridges" but NOT both.

Aeroplnut 5/10/11

Fixed. Smoke^{Sound off!} 01:01, September 19, 2011 (UTC)